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man: more grammar improvements
- place commas - expand contractions (this is written prose :) - add some missing words
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Zbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek
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@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@
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<para>The machine ID is usually generated from a
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random source during system installation and stays
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constant for all subsequent boots. Optionally, for
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stateless systems it is generated during runtime at
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stateless systems, it is generated during runtime at
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boot if it is found to be empty.</para>
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<para>The machine ID does not change based on user
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@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ id[8] = (id[8] & 0x3F) | 0x80;</programlisting>
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<para>(This code is inspired by
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<literal>generate_random_uuid()</literal> of
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<filename>drivers/char/random.c</filename> from the
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kernel sources.)</para>
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Linux kernel sources.)</para>
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</refsect1>
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@@ -123,7 +123,7 @@ id[8] = (id[8] & 0x3F) | 0x80;</programlisting>
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<para>The simple configuration file format of
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<filename>/etc/machine-id</filename> originates in the
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<filename>/var/lib/dbus/machine-id</filename> file
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introduced by D-Bus. In fact this latter file might be a
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introduced by D-Bus. In fact, this latter file might be a
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symlink to
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<varname>/etc/machine-id</varname>.</para>
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</refsect1>
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