man: more grammar improvements

- place commas
- expand contractions (this is written prose :)
- add some missing words
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Jan Engelhardt
2013-07-02 05:44:04 +02:00
committed by Zbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek
parent 337fa161c4
commit 409dee2e44
18 changed files with 217 additions and 210 deletions
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@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@
<para>The machine ID is usually generated from a
random source during system installation and stays
constant for all subsequent boots. Optionally, for
stateless systems it is generated during runtime at
stateless systems, it is generated during runtime at
boot if it is found to be empty.</para>
<para>The machine ID does not change based on user
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ id[8] = (id[8] &amp; 0x3F) | 0x80;</programlisting>
<para>(This code is inspired by
<literal>generate_random_uuid()</literal> of
<filename>drivers/char/random.c</filename> from the
kernel sources.)</para>
Linux kernel sources.)</para>
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@@ -123,7 +123,7 @@ id[8] = (id[8] &amp; 0x3F) | 0x80;</programlisting>
<para>The simple configuration file format of
<filename>/etc/machine-id</filename> originates in the
<filename>/var/lib/dbus/machine-id</filename> file
introduced by D-Bus. In fact this latter file might be a
introduced by D-Bus. In fact, this latter file might be a
symlink to
<varname>/etc/machine-id</varname>.</para>
</refsect1>